동사 + 는 대신
This pattern expresses contrast or substitution: instead of doing one action or producing one expected result, another action or result happens. In the story, it highlights that writing ideas did not appear, but calmness did. You can reuse it in many contexts to mean “instead of A, B” or “while A did not happen, B happened.” Example: "서두르는 대신 천천히 다시 읽어 보세요." = “Instead of rushing, read it again slowly.”
서두르는 대신 천천히 다시 읽어 보세요.
Instead of rushing, read it again slowly.
